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You should use it, Before you lose it !
- Use your brain -

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:iconstarboydeath:
really cool style!

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thx dude !:thanks:

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:iconstarboydeath:
welcome. :D

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"You've got to stand for something
or you'll fall for anything."

Visit my dA portfolio and my profile, ~StarBoyDeath, that's me
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nice design - it made me stop and click so something about it made me think it might be important. However, I didn't intuitively read it as you meant it, and I even couldn't figure out the order of the words on my second try. I thought it would be fairly rude if walked past this deviation, thought that, and then _didn't_ bother to tell you.

Also, perhaps consider cutting the 'you should'. 'You' grabs me, but 'should' repels me and sends me off worrying about things i should have done today, should have done by now, should be able to do, etc. "Use" is a great place to start because it is active and demands participation.

A link to the 'brain' as what the text was referring to wasn't apparent to me in the image.

Hope those thoughts help. I think it's a nice design overall.

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Impossible to read it the way you want it to be read.
:iconsaycostudioz:
Everyone did it well i think !

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